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Old 08-31-2010, 03:08 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Question Review my portfolio redesign and help me decide

Hello,

I have been planning to redesign my portfolio since jan 2009 but never got the chance to do it and finally I have done it.

I would greatly appreciate your feedback, suggestions and opinions regarding what I came up with as I am very confused and aim to perfect the job as much as possible.

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P.S this isn't the portfolio page, highlighted it to show the sub-navbar

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Old 08-31-2010, 03:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Default Re: Review my portfolio redesign and help me decide

I prefer the layout on concept 2. And I like the second logo down the best, it's something i've not seen much, cept when I look at the second word, it makes me think that there's something missing from the first. :P
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Old 08-31-2010, 04:11 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Concept 2 because i think that the slider should be in the middle, I feel that people may miss it if it's at the bottom of the page
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Old 08-31-2010, 04:48 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Default Re: Review my portfolio redesign and help me decide

Concept two, but I think you should deal without the black panel titles at the bottom because they're no longer within the flow of the picture. At that point they feel weird. Maybe stretch them all the way across the top of the footer boxes or create an embossed title for them?
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Old 08-31-2010, 05:25 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Default Re: Review my portfolio redesign and help me decide

New Concept:

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Old 08-31-2010, 05:34 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Fourth Concept:

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Old 08-31-2010, 06:38 PM   #7 (permalink)
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actually all concepts can be found here: AzizNatour - Album - TinyPic - Free Image Hosting, Photo Sharing & Video Hosting
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Old 09-01-2010, 06:18 AM   #8 (permalink)
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I think I will go with this one:

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Default Re: Review my portfolio redesign and help me decide

Latest concept makes most sense. But I really liked how the tabs of "headlines & events" and "awesome people I worked with" got this flow Corey told about.

I've no idea how you could use these tabs on your slider, maybe previous and next button.

For the logo, the 3th looks the most professional I think, but the 2nd is more personal and caught my attention compared to the others
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Old 09-01-2010, 03:16 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Default Re: Review my portfolio redesign and help me decide

Hey Aziz,
I like the design. I think the background should be a different color than gray because your headers are already that color. I think it makes sense for the headers to stand out so the background should be a different color.
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