3 Tips To Turn The Time You Spend Jerkin’ It Into Money

[Lukas]

This is the latest guest post on LukasLarsson.Com, by Houston from QuarterLifeProfits. Please check it out and comment! 3 Tips To Turn The Time You Spend Jerkin’ It Into Money

Thanks a ton!

[klaja26]

I havent read it yet but already it has my attention just because of the title. Now for me to read the post.

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Not a bad article. Mostly common sense but very well written.

[bw9231345]

Originally Posted by klaja26

Not a bad article. Mostly common sense but very well written.

Agreed.............

[cecBUSINESS]

Nice article, the overall message is correct, but was the midget porn comment really appropriate? :L Ah well, added some humour.

[Lukas]

Thanks everyone!

@cec - Is there reason to not have it? Controversy can help articles grow, and no visitor is a bad visitor. :P

[Aziz]

refreshing, thanks for sharing. sometimes you need such articles to remind you how important time management is

[Sutler]

Originally Posted by Lukas

Thanks everyone!

@cec - Is there reason to not have it? Controversy can help articles grow, and no visitor is a bad visitor. :P

The article itself wasn't bad, but whenever I see someone who's supposed to be 'acting' professional say something like that I lose considerable respect for both the author and who he represents. Resorting to crude 'jokes' like those is both unprofessional and unappealing to many people.

[Caleb]

I see what you're trying to do with the "porn" comment and the swearing (don't f*cking multitask) but I feel like it's almost forced. Also, because those are in there, I disregard it as professional and read it more as just leisure. If you're going for the more professional look, I suggest to drop those, and if you're trying to be funny, don't use such major swear words. Also, the porn comment is touchy (ha.ha.ha.) to some people and it'll put them more on edge than relax them to the humor.

Just my thoughts. Also, shorten it? It seemed like a lot of pontification (my prof didn't stop using that all semester, so it's stuck) and not a whole lot of fact. I found myself skimming to get to the "good stuff" which isn't what you want a reader to do. I'd add headers, break up the content, and get rid of the "fluff."

Good information, though, and well organized!

EDIT :: I know you didn't write the article personally, just thought I'd make that clear. I was critiquing the layout and information itself, not the person.

[Lukas]

Originally Posted by Letter9

I see what you're trying to do with the "porn" comment and the swearing (don't f*cking multitask) but I feel like it's almost forced. Also, because those are in there, I disregard it as professional and read it more as just leisure. If you're going for the more professional look, I suggest to drop those, and if you're trying to be funny, don't use such major swear words. Also, the porn comment is touchy (ha.ha.ha.) to some people and it'll put them more on edge than relax them to the humor.

Just my thoughts. Also, shorten it? It seemed like a lot of pontification (my prof didn't stop using that all semester, so it's stuck) and not a whole lot of fact. I found myself skimming to get to the "good stuff" which isn't what you want a reader to do. I'd add headers, break up the content, and get rid of the "fluff."

Good information, though, and well organized!

EDIT :: I know you didn't write the article personally, just thought I'd make that clear. I was critiquing the layout and information itself, not the person.

Thanks for the feedback. Much appreciated. I'll let the author know as well.

[Caleb]

No problem! I love to help out where I can.