Old 12-04-2011, 06:34 AM   #1 (permalink)
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..... Hi

This is a simple contest, I'll love to offer a reward but ive got none at the moment.
Here is what I need anyone to help do

1.Here is my landing page : Optin Box Design: Custom designed opt-in boxes with high conversion rates
2.Take a screeen shot of it
3.See how many times you could include these keywords in ANY text and still make sense out of it. [all keywords must be included]

opt in box
opt in code
opt in example
opt in services
opt in templates
opt template
optin box
web design box

4.The more keywords included in the annotations of the screen shot the better.

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Old 12-04-2011, 06:56 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Hey! I just signed up to let you know that there is a misspelling in some of the pictures..

In your pictures it says "You dont like spam, and so do I"
I think it should be "You don't like spam, and neither do I"
or "You don't like spam, and nor do I"

I have attached a picture where i marked it with red..
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Old 12-04-2011, 06:59 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks a lot Mikkel!!
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Thanks guys. I figured out I might as well do it myself [how lazy i am lol]

Here's the end product
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Old 12-13-2011, 02:16 AM   #6 (permalink)
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I am too late, i think so
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I know you're going for SEO friendly...but stuffing keywords in like that makes it kind of awkward for the actual humans reading the sales page. At the very least you really don't have to replace every instance of the word "example" with "opt-in example." By this point on the page potential customers know what they're looking at.

Also, "you don't get to mess" should be "you don't have to mess." Using the word "get" feels kinda rude.
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